The lift with no floor: cliffhanger chat template

    A ready X (Twitter) DM-look chat for the cliffhanger openers gallery, seven messages and about 23 seconds as a video. Open it, change the words and export it as a labelled, fictional mock-up.

    Preview in the X (Twitter) DM look

    Cass
    C
    Cass
    @cass
    Joined January 2020
    2:05 PM

    The lift in my building has a new button.

    Which floor?

    There is no number on it. Just a dot.

    Do not press it.

    Cass, I pressed it.

    And?

    The doors opened on a corridor I have never seen.

    C
    Seen
    Open this template in the editorThis look is on the Free plan.

    The full script (7 messages)

    WynThe lift in my building has a new button.
    CassWhich floor?
    WynThere is no number on it. Just a dot.
    CassDo not press it.
    WynCass, I pressed it.
    CassAnd?
    WynThe doors opened on a corridor I have never seen.

    The first four messages open on the Free plan; the rest need a paid plan.

    The template: The lift with no floor

    The lift with no floor is a seven-message template for a cliffhanger chat: Wyn and Cass trade lines from "The lift in my building has a new button." to "The doors opened on a corridor I have never seen.", about 23 seconds as a video.

    Message 7 is the longest at 10 words ("The doors opened on a corridor I have never seen.") and message 6 is the shortest ("And?"). Two lines ask a question, so the other person keeps answering.

    Using it in the X (Twitter) DM look

    Open on a claim, not a greeting. The first message should already hold the thing the viewer wants to learn more about. Extras in this look: read marks and reactions; missing: typing dots and an online status. No upgrade is needed to try X (Twitter) DM. Let the final message be a reaction, not an explanation. Explaining kills the cliffhanger; reacting extends it. This look has no typing indicator, so surprise has to come from the message itself and from the gap before it.

    What the Free plan shows

    On a Free account you see four messages of The lift with no floor, ending at "Do not press it.". To get to "The doors opened on a corridor I have never seen.", three messages later, upgrade to a paid plan.

    Tips

    • Pause on Cass's "Do not press it." before moving to the next bubble.
    • Let the opening "The lift in my building has a new button." breathe so a late scroller still knows who is talking.
    • Put Part 1 in the title and link Part 2 in the first comment.
    • Make the ending your own by editing "The doors opened on a corridor I have never seen."; add "fictional chat" to the caption.
    • Try two new names in place of Wyn and Cass, then read the story out loud once.

    Questions

    Can I use The lift with no floor on the Free plan?

    Yes for the look, with limits. The X (Twitter) DM look is on the Free plan, and the editor loads the first four of the seven messages and two people. The rest needs a paid plan. Exports on Free carry a visible ChatsRat watermark.

    How long is The lift with no floor as a video?

    About 23 seconds at a comfortable reading pace, counting seven messages with a short beat between them. Add a second or two for the ending card.

    Is this cliffhanger chat a real conversation?

    No. It is an invented chat between Wyn and Cass, made as a mock-up. ChatsRat is not affiliated with, endorsed by or sponsored by any messaging app, and look names describe a style only. Label what you publish as fiction.

    Can I change the names and lines?

    Yes. Open the template in the editor, replace any line or name and export your own version. Keep the characters invented, and keep the content free of real people and anything sexual.

    This is fiction. The people in this template are invented. ChatsRat makes mock-ups and fictional conversations for creators, designers and teachers. Do not use it to pass off a made-up conversation as a real one, to impersonate a real person, or as proof of anything. See the Acceptable Use policy.

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