Snapchat-style mystery text story: The haunted fridge

    A ready Snapchat-style chat for a small mystery solved in messages, eight messages long and about 23 seconds as a video. Load it, change the words and export it as a labelled, fictional mock-up.

    The full script (8 messages)

    CleoThe fridge hums a tune.
    DexWhich tune?
    CleoHappy Birthday. Slowly.
    DexIt is the ice maker.
    CleoThe ice maker is off.
    DexCheck the freezer.
    CleoThere is a tiny speaker in it.
    DexIt is a birthday card.

    The first four messages open on the Free plan; the rest need a paid plan.

    Open this story in the editorThis look needs a paid plan.

    The script: The haunted fridge

    Cleo begins this mystery clue with "The fridge hums a tune.". After eight messages, Dex has the final word, "It is a birthday card.". Expect about 23 seconds on screen.

    Message 7 is the longest at 7 words ("There is a tiny speaker in it."); message 2 is the shortest ("Which tune?"). One line asks a question, so the other person keeps answering.

    How the Snapchat look carries the story

    The look suits quick, jokey exchanges and "streak" style banter, where the humour lives in how little each person writes. Extras in this look: typing dots and read marks; missing: reactions and an online status. This look starts at the Standard plan, which is worth knowing before you plan a batch of stories. It is on the Standard plan or above in ChatsRat, so a free account cannot open it. This look uses ChatsRat's shared layout, so treat it as a style guide.

    Writing notes: mystery clue

    Plant the clue early in a throwaway line, then point back to it in the reveal. Viewers love to realise it was there all along. Fair play matters: do not hide the key fact from the viewer. A cheated answer loses the audience.

    What the Free plan shows

    On a Free account you see four messages of The haunted fridge, ending at "It is the ice maker.". To get to "It is a birthday card.", four messages later, upgrade to a paid plan.

    Tips

    • Pause on Cleo's "The ice maker is off." before moving on to the next bubble.
    • Let the opening "The fridge hums a tune." breathe so a late scroller still knows who is talking.
    • Make the ending your own by editing "It is a birthday card."; add "fictional chat" to the caption.
    • Try two new names in place of Cleo and Dex, then read the story out loud once.
    • Check that "Which tune?" lands in under two seconds of reading time.

    Questions

    Can I use The haunted fridge on the Free plan?

    The Snapchat look needs the Standard plan or above, so a Free account cannot open it. The Plans page lists what each plan includes, and the Free plan shows the first four messages of a free look.

    How long is The haunted fridge as a video?

    About 23 seconds at a comfortable reading pace, counting eight messages with a short beat between them. Add a second or two for the ending card and a little more if you use a typing indicator before the last line.

    Can the mystery be part of a series?

    Yes. End each episode with a small new question and use the same two characters so viewers recognise them.

    Is this Snapchat-style chat a real conversation?

    No. It is an invented story between Cleo and Dex, made as a mock-up. ChatsRat is not affiliated with, endorsed by or sponsored by Snapchat, and the name describes a style only. Label the video as fiction.

    This is fiction. The people and events in this story are invented. ChatsRat makes mock-ups and fictional conversations for creators, designers and teachers. Do not use it to pass off a made-up conversation as a real one, to impersonate a real person, or as proof of anything. See the Acceptable Use policy.

    About the watermark. Exports on the Free plan carry a visible ChatsRat watermark, and every export carries an invisible mark that the verify page can read. Plans list what changes on paid plans.

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